Starleaf.. 星星、叶子の故事: 《萤火虫》

Monday, January 24, 2005

一个个漂浮的烛光
像为黑夜带来希望
你们生命虽然短暂
但却有宏大的理想

夜黑了不要紧张
迷路了不要绝望
萤火虫永远在身旁
让你不再迷惘

漆黑夜里的曙光
温暖人们的心房
城市灯光虽璀璨
但不比你的光芒

At 12:04 AM, radancein said...: reminds me of yi neng jing's song..
At 12:15 AM, Starleaf said...: ahh... so u belong to tt era... =P heee.. it was one of my fav childhood song u noe? heee... ur right la.. i got my inspiration frm there =)
At 9:29 AM, Starleaf said...: hmmm... dun exactly get ur comment.. but the yi neng jing song was one of my fav childhood song.. =)
At 8:13 PM, radancein said...: 伊能静 - 萤火虫
At 4:31 PM, ic3snow said...: you shld change to "萤火虫永在身旁". as saiman as commented, if u hv equal no of words per stanza, or per line. yeah.
At 11:33 PM, Lionel de Lioncourt said...: yar i think shiling is right tt ya words too kou 3 yu3, so its reads like the lyrics of a popsong rather than a poem, not to mention u had inspiration fr a song. but still its a nice piece of writing, my fav on ya blog so far. i think its partly becos it reads v smoothly n rhythmic.

continue to jia you, xiao di!
At 6:16 PM, Starleaf said...: Da jie... u finally commented on my blog!!! tt calls for a celebration! =) haha... maybe if got time i'll try to modify it la..