《亡 》
精心的天罗地网单纯的一个脸庞
看似天使般的心
隐藏魔鬼般的梦
无声无息 、无丝无迹
静静等待 , 猎物降临
小心翼翼 、不漏心机
默默觅食 , 猎物点滴
像单纯的小白鹿
像无知的小绵羊
踩着死亡的步伐
走进险恶的天网
无法回头 、 只能往前走
后悔莫及 、 只怪自己蠢
自寻灭亡 、 只得旁人笑
眼前黑暗 、 只得自己扛
posted by Starleaf @ 10:22:00 PM
Friday, February 25, 2005
单纯的一个脸庞
看似天使般的心
隐藏魔鬼般的梦
无声无息 、无丝无迹
静静等待 , 猎物降临
小心翼翼 、不漏心机
默默觅食 , 猎物点滴
像单纯的小白鹿
像无知的小绵羊
踩着死亡的步伐
走进险恶的天网
无法回头 、 只能往前走
后悔莫及 、 只怪自己蠢
自寻灭亡 、 只得旁人笑
眼前黑暗 、 只得自己扛
10 Comments:
wow wat a topic to write on, why did u get the inspiration? think u can write naturally, i mean fr the rate u come out wif writings la. but i think the 3rd paragraph v cliche leh, i mean the pure deer n the innocent lamb, how old fashion can u get? hahaha
da jie... u online ah? hmm... erm.. haha... the source of inspiration ah... hmmm.. hahaha... actually .. i was writing abt someone la.. and me being the victim.. can try guessing? haha
ui r the victim?
so u r the sheep??
hmm....sheep to describe u ah.....haha....;?
a rare moment of morbidity on ur part though....u r turning to the dark side.....;>
nono... i'm still standing on the bright side.. =)
hmmm... interesting... so far no one attempted to ans who tt person in the poem is wor... haha .. hee..
ehx. the one tt's stepping into the darkness is u or the one tt eat the sheep n deer? abit confused at ur last paragraph...
erm.. so will there be a price if guess correct? else cannot be bothered le..
to dor:
stepping into the darkness is the deer and the sheep la.. not the eater la... haiz... i really so shi bai ah ?? :'(
to radancein:
there will be no price to pay la... no PRIZES oso... hahaha.... haiz.. some pple so xian shi .. tsk..
u're writing based on wat irritating kid said is it?
no... definitely not..
nope... that's not right either... so far only hh ah ma got wat i was toking abt.. =) erm.. more guesses?
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